The Brunel Writer Prize 2024

Every year, The Brunel Writer Prize is awarded to the student with the highest graded article submission for the Creative Industries module on Brunel University’s Creative Writing Programme. This year’s winner is Krisi Georgieva who reviews the controversial contribution that Warner Bro’s Barbie (2023) film has made to feminism in society. Congratulations Krisi!

Reviewing the 2023 Barbie Film: Feminism 101

© WarnerBros. — Barbie

In a world where women are socially and systematically subservient to men, perhaps it is fitting that Barbie was one of, if not the most, popular film to be released in 2023. The film follows the iconic character and doll, Barbie (Margot Robbie), and her journey to the human world where, oh boy, men have taken over. Living a perfect, glamorous life, Barbie begins to malfunction; bad breath, cold showers, burnt waffles, flat feet, and uh-oh, “thoughts of death”. She begins to experience an all too real existence rather than a plastic one: the beginning of the end. The film also portrays Ken (Ryan Gosling), who travels to the real world with Barbie in order to fix this malfunction, only to become infatuated with the concept of patriarchy, and returns home to impart this revolutionary knowledge to all the other Kens. 

From there, it is Barbie’s mission to save Barbie Land from Ken and his new regime. But who will save us in the audience? Barbie is clearly intended as a feminist film which aims to empower young women, and for the most part, it does just that. It fails, however, to take any real responsibility for the damage the Barbie franchise has done to young girls and women for decades since its debut. This is repeatedly brought up by the character of Sasha – a young feminist girl who criticises Barbie throughout the film. 

Barbie can do, be, and say anything she wants; she’s an excellent representation of what women could be, in an ideal world. She’s also an excellent reflection of the unreachable beauty standards perpetuated by the patriarchy. The film offers no resolution here, not really. In fact, the anti-hero, the Mattel CEO, is not punished for his actions in any way. By the end, he changes his mind, only because he was swayed by the prospect of more money, but has no real character development, no growth. Another – unsurprising – point to capitalism. 

In some ways, I would say this film sets us back a little. Capitalism, patriarchy, and sexism reign in reality already; must they go unchecked in a fantasy world, too? It sets a terribly dangerous precedent. In the film, Barbie and her fellow Barbie friends present a lovely sisterhood which is spoiled by Ken’s insecurity because “Barbie has a great day, every day, but Ken only has a great day if Barbie looks at him”, which in fact Barbie apologises for by the end. The truth is, Ken spends the majority of the film feeling insecure and competing with the other Kens over Barbie’s affection when they all could have had a friendship just as lovely as that of the Barbies. This story fails to fathom that men can be more than just rivals and competitors. Even so, a narrative about Barbie in Barbie Land still, somehow, ends up revolving around Ken. Even a fictional world cannot procure a situation where a woman is the centre of attention: the dominant presence.

© Warner Bros. — Barbie

Even a fictional world cannot procure a situation where a woman is the centre of attention: the dominant presence.”

Perhaps all this would be somewhat excusable had the film been targeted solely at feminist scholars and academics who would hopefully be more familiar with feminist theory than the general public, and be able to construct a critique more sophisticated than this one. Instead, this was seen by people of all ages and genders which in some ways is good and exposes the fact that women are not yet liberated and that there is much more work to be done. In other ways, not so much. Children, little girls, will see this film and think it is their responsibility to soothe a boy’s bruised ego.

The Barbie film has set the bar just a little lower, has set progress just a little farther back, and has set an unhealthy precedent for little people who are just starting to become aware of the world. Overall, the film is like a 101 Feminist Theory class; it covers the basics, but you still need to go higher. Low-hanging fruit and all that.

Krisi is an English student who plans to continue their studies with a Master’s in Gender Politics. Krisi has always been fascinated by the nuances of gender and sexuality politics, and this is reflected in their writing — and their coasting pronouns. True to the stereotype, Krisi has in fact had various shades of blue hair.

Joining the LinkedIn Sea by Grace Amui

Every year, The Brunel Writer Prize is awarded to the student with the highest graded article submission for the Creative Industries module on Brunel University’s Creative Writing Programme. Grace Amui was a runner-up for The Brunel Writer Prize 2024 with her journey and tips to “Joining the LinkedIn Sea.”

© Disney

You see it, the end on the horizon. The finish line with a gown, certificate and Professor Andrew Jones calling your name – hopefully pronouncing it correctly.
 
Graduation.
 
It’s exciting. As High School Musical demonstrates, expect singing, or screeching depending on your vocal ability. No judgment though.
 
If you’re anything like me, you realise there’s a world beyond our Uxbridge campus. A sea of people who seem to know each other and know what they’re doing with these very people who know each other.

But how can we, the new fish, submerge into this creative community?
 
I’ll give you a hint. It’s used for entertainment, procrastination and most importantly connection.
 
Yep. Social Media or… social networking.

Which one?


For creatives, there’s a sea of choice between TikTok’s #Booktok, Twitter – now X, the rarest letter of the alphabet – and Instagram, taking Reels and Threads from them both. However, here’s your invitation to explore a special ocean space I admittedly used to think was solely for Baby Boomers.
 
That’s right: LinkedIn.

© Disney – Don’t run, Forest, don’t run!

It’s not only for swimming accountants with decades of experience. Nor salmon with unusual Elon Musk-level knowledge of Artificial Intelligence. LinkedIn is simply another tool for building connections.

If leaving university sounds daunting, here’s how you can join this professional wave of “grown-ups.” 

  1. The Profile Photo: Unlike Instagram, where a cat driving a Ferrari proves a priceless photo for your meme account, LinkedIn profiles are about you. Yes, the profile photo should be your lovely face.

Keep it simple, head and shoulders – not the shampoo, although, again, I ain’t judging. Smile with a plain white background or industry logo where you’ve worked as a subtle self-promotion.

© Disney – Say, cheese!
  1. The Big CV: Upload a CV that gives information about roles you’ve had in the field you’ll apply for. No CV? Check out Brunel Careers and ASK for examples or use Chat GPT to start. Just remember Simona Janssen’s words: “Artificial Intelligence always needs a little HI“: Human Intelligence.
  1. Avoid the silent treatment: Now that your profile shines, post. Not about the holiday in Spain… what happens in Madrid stays there. Still, share relevant work in your sphere. New blog? Share it on your LinkedIn page. Attended a leaders’ talk? That too. Share, share, share when these happen with – you guessed it – more photos. These posts show that you’re even more than your CV. Why?

It tells the big fish you mean business!

  1. Followers or… friends: On this social network, think of followers less as strangers and more like potential friends you’ve met at a Christmas party – minus the drinks. LinkedIn’s head of marketing, Tobi Demuren, said more online friends cause LinkedIn’s algorithms to suggest your profile to others! Like networking, the more individuals you know, the better. So, get adding!
  1. Smaller communities: In any sea, there are smaller fish-communities. Join places like #Brunelalumni. That’s automatically 8000+ possible LinkedIn connections, including me! You’re basically famous now.
  1. LinkedIn Learning: These diverse courses enhance both you and your CV. From navigating “Artificial Intelligence” to “Overcoming Overthinking.” This may seem irrelevant, but the big-shark professionals produce these for those with LinkedIn premium…

Or Brunel students! Yay, FREE LinkedIn courses.

Fish in a Pond

As with anything, joining the ‘grown-ups’ table may feel daunting, but don’t let that predator, Imposter Syndrome stop you from taking that empty chair: which was really set for you in the first place. 

Remember, you have something to give this world. 

Then, Creative, just keep swimming.

© Disney – No seriously, swim and see. 

Grace Amui presents her poetry internationally and at age 22, her first musical, “This Is Me,” was performed in several shows at SEK International School in Barcelona, Spain. As a freelance editor and editor for Brunel Writer, who knew her childhood library visits would lead to a Theatre and Creative Writing BA? 

An Interview with the Voice in My Head by Scott Bransby

Every year, The Brunel Writer Prize is awarded to the student with the highest graded article submission for the Creative Industries module on Brunel University’s Creative Writing Programme. Scott Bransby is a runner-up for The Brunel Writer Prize 2024 with “An Interview with the Voice in My Head,” an honest discussion with… himself.

Photo Credit: Big Think found at https://bigthink.com/neuropsych/talking-to-yourself/

In January 2024, Scott Bransby sat down with himself to write a short piece of fiction for his portfolio. The following is an exclusive transcript between Scott and the voice in his head, Cecelia.

Scott: What am I supposed to write exactly? I mean, there is so much I could do, but none feel right. What do people really want to hear from me?

Cecelia: Hi.

S: Not now, I’m concentrating.

C: Hellooo…

S: Shut it. Haven’t you got somewhere to be? Imagining one of your fancy lives where you’re a stay-at-home mum of two or the CEO of a major conglomerate corporation.

C: Nah-ah. I’m right here now with you. Whatcha doing?

S: Trying to write a portfolio piece, thanks for your disruption.

C: What are you thinking of writing?

S: If you must know and aren’t leaving anytime soon, I was initially going to start writing my fantasy chapter- but I just can’t shake the feeling that something won’t work. I don’t even know if anyone would even like what I bring to the genre.

C: Well… I like your writing.

S: You would.

C: What’s that supposed to mean?

S: Well, you are an extension of myself. Your thoughts and feelings fluctuate based on how I feel. If I don’t like something, you don’t like it either. If you like my writing, then I like what I’ve written. It’s quite simple. 

C: That’s not the case though, Scott-o. You don’t like what you’re writing currently. I should know – I have a psychic ability where I can read your mind and know exactly what you are thinking. I’ll try it now: cheese… Dua Lipa… intertextuality?

S: I’m writing my Games Design thesis as well-

C: I blocked that out: mega yawn-fest. I like the drama of living these stories out in your brain. Remember that piece you wrote back in your first-year fiction module at university? The one with sisters fighting for the crests of their Queendom? What about last year, when you wrote that twisted fairy tale about the girl trapped in a dungeon of her own hair? I got to live as each of those characters, feel their souls and taste their very essence. 

S: Well thanks-

C: Now, the fiction you write is so… commercial. It’s like you write because you must, not because you want to. How am I supposed to get into character as yet another widow who thinks she has seen her dead husband? It’s so played out. You are not the next Harlen Coben – you are Scott Bransby. Where’s your inspiration gone?

S: I-

C: No. I am not done. I’m sick of you not writing stuff I enjoy anymore. You grew up in a town brimming with inspiration. Not many people can say they ate breakfast opposite Shakespeare’s birthplace every Saturday. Your writing is unique – you colour the world outside the lines and reference every detail to your own detriment. I enjoy living in stories like that, where you authored my world. Your work may be good, but I know you don’t feel anything towards it. There, mic-drop. You can speak now.

S: I don’t know what to say. I didn’t realise you cared so much about my work. I’ve been so caught up writing for a faceless person or writing what I feel is compulsory that I forgot I should want to read it too; that you are the constant in my narrative, my guiding hand. You’ve always been there for me, watching–

C: Ew, you’re getting soppy. This isn’t the place for you to get soppy.

S: Oh, alright. Well, that still doesn’t solve what I should write for this portfolio piece.

C: Listen, maybe I can help with that…

Scott Bransby is a BA Games Design & Creative Writing graduate from Brunel University. Separating the self from the work allows Scott to humanise his words and speak from a deeper, reflective place. A self-proclaimed chatterbox, he loves to write as much as he loves to talk, leaving the little room remaining for casting eldritch blasts on Baldur’s Gate 3 and shiny hunting Pokémon.